上海新东方名师评析新六级作文范文

　　上海新东方名师评析新六级作文范文

　　作者：上海新东方明星教师 吴泽扬

　　the importance of reading classics

　　1、阅读经典书籍队人的成长至关重要

　　2、现在愿意阅读经典的人越来越少，原因是……

　　3、我们大学生应该怎么做

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　　审题：原因现象类。可用模式，中心句＋1、2、3。因为是外语考试文章，观点不用细查，重要的语音表达。请一定记住，简单但严重错误是应该尽力避免的，宁可简单也别出现这种错误。本样文有些不妥之处，但完全符合四六级写作的基本要求，中心突出(把提纲变为英文，以段首句形式出现)，层次分明(逻辑词，即连接词的恰当应用)，语言有变化(近意表达，举行转化)，无重大语音错误。

　　Now some people, especially the elderly, are of the view that classics play a significant role in the life. English learners, for example, can benefit a lot from the famous readings, or classical books. Besides, they maintain that their childhood is exposed to these GREat minds.

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　　However, young men in growing numbers seldom enjoy reading these articles or books. In other words, they find few interests in reading so-called classics. A lot of reasons are responsible for this. To begin with, they are in the shadow of practical minds. These classics may not meet the needs. What’s more, online reading is a good way for people to get information easily and efficiently. Moreover, the young people are too busy to read them.

　　From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation. First, we can enjoy these minds in our free time. Second, these articles or novels will be arranged for further reading in our retirement. Certainly, it is high time that we placed GREat emphasis on the issue.

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